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thank you buddy, that's better.


more of that.

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you could be a good nice guy if you wanted

see, very nice

Travyon, played by Jaden Smith, is shown at school, raising his hand in lit class. The wise Hispanic teacher, played by Antonio Banderas, calls on him. Trayvon stand up and recites lines of Shakespeare in a hip, cool, but moving rap. As he sits down Banderas smiles and nods at him with a wise, knowing approval.

Trayvon is seen hanging out after school on the lush greens of the front school yard with his friends, featuring the girl who played Precious, plus a mix of races: a white blonde girl, a Hispanic kid, an Urkel-looking black nerd, a white kid with his hat on backwards. A veritable Burger King Kids Club.

Cut to a dark apartment, where Zimmerman, played by Edward Norton, is doing pull-ups, with the words FEAR and HATE inked on his knuckles. He then practices shooting his empty gun at himself in a mirror. "You talking to me?" Norton says. "You in MY neighborhood?" He then sits down to watch Birth of a Nation.

Cut to Trayvon at home, at the dinner table with his parents, played by Jamie Foxx and Maya Angelou. They discuss Tray's future plans of being an airline pilot. "It's a mighty big responsibility," Jamie Foxx says. "Having all those souls onboard." "I know," Jaden/Tray says. "I want to be like Sully some day though."

After dinner his little brother, wheelchair bound, asks him if he can go get some candy and tea. Even though it's raining out, Tray agrees. In slow-mo he zips up his hoody, pulled from the dryer.

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Time-skip: Cut to Zimmerman patrolling the streets, whistling the Confederate Anthem, as rain pours on his golden hair. He does tuck-and-rolls across neighbors' lawns, pulling out his gun and pointing it at dark shadows. A cat crosses his path and he fires at it. He chuckles mercilessly.

"Keep the change," Tray says with a smile to the woman working at the convenience store. With the snacks for his brother he walks out of the store, not before passing by a magazine with Sully on the cover. Tray smiles.

Cut to Trayvon skipping down the sidewalk. A group of multicultural young maled is there smoking pot. "You wanna get high?" one asks. "No," Trayvon answers, "then I'll never be able to be a pilot." He continues to skip down the path and eventually enters the condo complex.

As Trayvon turns a corner, a sweaty and enraged Zimmerman emerges from the shadows. "Where do you think you're going, N-----?"

Trayvon stumbles on his words and tries to answer but is silenced when Zim cold cocks himself with the gun and starts beating himself on the back of his own head. "Help! Help! Somebody help me!" Zimmerman screams.

Zimmerman does a nazi salute, and shouts with the malice needed for a 2nd degree murder conviction clearly present in his cold blue eyes, "WHITE PRIDE!"

"Please sir, I just want to return home to my brother and finish my homework," Trayvon pleads.

"That's too bad," Zimmerman says. He then empties his entire magazine into the baby-faced teen. "It looks like your dog ate it."

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> Travyon, played by Jaden Smith, is shown at
> school, raising his hand in lit class. The wise
> Hispanic teacher, played by Antonio Banderas,
> calls on him. Trayvon stand up and recites lines
> of Shakespeare in a hip, cool, but moving rap. As
> he sits down Banderas smiles and nods at him with
> a wise, knowing approval.
>
> Trayvon is seen hanging out after school on the
> lush greens of the front school yard with his
> friends, featuring the girl who played Precious,
> plus a mix of races: a white blonde girl, a
> Hispanic kid, an Urkel-looking black nerd, a white
> kid with his hat on backwards. A veritable Burger
> King Kids Club.
>
> Cut to a dark apartment, where Zimmerman, played
> by Edward Norton, is doing pull-ups, with the
> words FEAR and HATE inked on his knuckles. He then
> practices shooting his empty gun at himself in a
> mirror. "You talking to me?" Norton says. "You in
> MY neighborhood?" He then sits down to watch Birth
> of a Nation.
>
> Cut to Trayvon at home, at the dinner table with
> his parents, played by Jamie Foxx and Maya
> Angelou. They discuss Tray's future plans of being
> an airline pilot. "It's a mighty big
> responsibility," Jamie Foxx says. "Having all
> those souls onboard." "I know," Jaden/Tray says.
> "I want to be like Sully some day though."
>
> After dinner his little brother, wheelchair bound,
> asks him if he can go get some candy and tea. Even
> though it's raining out, Tray agrees. In slow-mo
> he zips up his hoody, pulled from the dryer.

Brilliant. Now skip to the part where Norton starts screaming "put your mouth on the curb" to Smith.

Shit, I'm too slow on the draw. You already did.



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about to watch Project X. anyone seen this? is it any good?

The rain continues to pour. It’s now in all black and white now, Zimmerman coolly walks over to the incapacitated Trayvon which has fallen Christ-like, who struggles to stand, blood pouring from his mouth. Zimmerman puts one foot on Trayvon chest. Trayvon moans in pain, Zimmerman aims at his head.

"Heil Hitler" Zimmerman says. He fires. At that moment a dozen of white doves fly above the scene.
Zimmerman glances at Trayvon’s skittles laying across the sidewalk, Zimmerman picks up one of the skittles off the ground and taste it. He's grinning like the Cheshire cat, incredibly sweaty, and, it's implied, somewhat sexually aroused. He strikes a match on the ground by Trayvon's corpse and lights a thick Cuban cigar. "Taste the rainbow, motherfucker." While smiling directly into the camera.

The next scene Zimmerman is being led by police, cold and emotionless. Out of the shadows appears a sinister looking man who hands Zimmerman his card. "Don't worry, George", he says. "We always take care of our own." Zimmerman reads the card and then notices a ring on the man's finger, indicating he is a member of the same white supremacist organization he is. Zimmerman gives the man a knowing smile as he offers a firm handshake.
"I'm George. George Zimmerman."
"Pleasure to meet you, George. I'm Don. Don West." Revealing Bryan Cranston

FIN

he don't come around here no more, you know that
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You said he emptied the entire magazine in your second post, yet in your third you said he fired a shot into his head. No mention of a reload, so that's a major continuancy error there.

I give it a 3/10.

fucking lame forum


boring ASS shit

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Fresh, hip, Shakespeare

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White doves!

"Taste the rainbow, motherfucker"!!

"Burger King Kids' club"!!??

JADEN SMITH!!!!!???

Good shit. It's shameful that someone would call this place boring in the same thread that your work was posted, Mr. Eyedea

Signatures are for fags

Dear Eesh jus when u think Brett davenport promo is finished he is back

He wants to video chat with u Master Eeshh
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eesh is only interested in Brett if the rumors about Brett being a pillow biting power bottom are true.

If Brett can host, eesh will travel.

shit threads on the first page



pick it up, guys