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This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: English Teacher ()
Date: May 21, 2018 07:56PM

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WHAT: The violent animals of MS-13 have committed heinous, violent attacks in communities across America.

Too many innocent Americans have fallen victim to the unthinkable violence of MS-13’s animals.

At the State of the Union in January 2018, President Trump brought as his guests Elizabeth Alvarado, Robert Mickens, Evelyn Rodriguez, and Freddy Cuevas, the parents of Nisa Mickens and Kayla Cuevas. Police believe these young girls were chased down and brutally murdered by MS-13 gang members on Long Island, New York, in 2016. Suffolk County Police Commissioner stated that the “murders show a level of brutality that is close to unmatched.”

In Maryland, MS-13’s animals are accused of stabbing a man more than 100 times and then decapitating him, dismembering him, and ripping his heart out of his body. Police believe MS-13 members in Maryland also savagely beat a 15-year-old human trafficking victim. The MS-13 animals used a bat and took turns beating her nearly 30 times in total.

In Houston, Texas, two MS-13 members were charged after kidnapping and sexually assaulting one girl and murdering another. The two MS-13 animals laughed, smiled, and waved for cameras in court as they faced the charges.

New York communities have suffered tremendously from the abhorrent violence of MS-13. Nearly 40 percent of all murders in Suffolk County, New York between January 2016 and June 2017 were tied to MS-13.

In January 2017, MS-13 members were charged with killing and hacking up a teenager in Nassau County. MS-13’s animals reportedly saw the murder as a way to boost their standing in the gang. In April 2017, police believe four young men were brutally murdered by MS-13 animals on Long Island. One victim was a young man in town visiting family during an Easter week vacation. Just last month, in April 2018, MS-13 reportedly called for its members on Long Island to kill a cop for the sake of making a statement.

WHY: MS-13 is a transnational gang which follows the motto of “kill, rape, control” by committing shocking acts of violence in an attempt to instill fear and gain control.

MS-13 is a transnational gang that has brought violence, fear, and suffering to American communities. MS-13, short for Mara Salvatrucha, commits shocking acts of violence to instill fear, including machete attacks, executions, gang rape, human trafficking, and more. In their motto, the animals of MS-13 make clear their goal is to “kill, rape, control.” The gang has more than 10,000 members in the United States spreading violence and suffering.

Recent investigations have revealed MS-13 gang leaders based in El Salvador have been sending representatives into the United States illegally to connect the leaders with local gang members. These foreign-based gang leaders direct local members to become even more violent in an effort to control more territory.

President Trump’s entire Administration is working tirelessly to bring these violent animals to justice.

DON TRUMP
ENGLISH 12 D

ESSAY GRADE D

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: Ying Ko ()
Date: May 21, 2018 08:18PM

this is the level trump supporters can comprehend.

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: jkgdh ()
Date: May 21, 2018 09:21PM

This is the level of dumb butthurt libtard posts.

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: faggots still butt hurt ()
Date: May 21, 2018 09:36PM

You should be ashamed of yourselves! LOL!

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: My Wife is Brown like you OP ()
Date: May 21, 2018 09:55PM

Well the Point of the essay is COMMON KNOWLEDGE.

Everyone wants the Miss 13, death cult eradicated.

OP, and your point is ???

It's never about race .. it's about right and wrong, sin and righteousness, character and the lack thereof.

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: DaleKohl ()
Date: August 19, 2018 06:15AM

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: Eikfd ()
Date: August 19, 2018 06:36AM

Op is antifa and doesn’t like exposing violence.
If the article was same but how uneducated trump supporters are, he would’ve got an A

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Date: August 24, 2018 06:22AM

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: Gerrymanderer2. ()
Date: September 13, 2018 07:45AM

Libtards can't read very well.

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: Pc retardz ()
Date: September 13, 2018 11:22AM

So what you're saying is that 3rd grader Trump

Rebuilt Manhattan
Billionaire
Marries world class beauties
Wins club golf tournaments
Best selling author
Tv star for a decade
Becomes president on a tiny budget
Builds a hotel under budget while running
Passes biggest tax cut in 40 years
Crushes Isis in 8 months
Handles 3 hurricanes at once
Revolutionized politics in social media
Defeats the media
Defeats Hollywood
Defeats the deep state
Names 2 justices
Turbocharges economic growth


Apparently all are other and former leaders are in kindergarten.

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: trumpitality ()
Date: September 13, 2018 11:29AM

Haha Liberals, among whom the most articulate can barely shout "Fuck Trump' have no room to speak about anyone.

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
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Date: November 18, 2018 02:54PM

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Date: April 21, 2020 08:20AM

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Date: April 21, 2020 08:38AM

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Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 04/21/2020 08:41AM by UltraRight.

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: GlicerinEBAG ()
Date: April 24, 2020 05:16AM

UltraRight Wrote:
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> Yeah, that's true. This is an unqualified essay. I
> know a place where they can improve their writing
> skills. And if any of you need help with an essay,
> then you can view this site href="https://essayservice.com/">https://essayserv
> ice.com/, where there are professional tutors,
> teachers who help students write good essays. As
> we have already understood, this is very
> important, because some students then become
> journalists who write either good articles or
> those that are impossible to read. This happens
> only if they have a mediocre boss who doesn't
> understand anything about journalism. So that
> people don't suffer from reading incompetent
> essays or articles, it's better to learn to write
> correctly in advance.

Why didn’t anyone tell me about this some months ago?!

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Posted by: Trumptards unite ()
Date: April 24, 2020 10:47AM

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Date: April 24, 2020 11:18AM

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> MAGA

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Posted by: Samuel90 ()
Date: May 05, 2020 10:01AM

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Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 05/05/2020 10:03AM by Samuel90.

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Re: This essay reads like it was written by a third grader.
Posted by: bioclotidtai ()
Date: May 26, 2020 03:12AM

Samuel90 Wrote:
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Lol honestly I feel like a lot of people who
support trump actually have no idea what school in
general is. I feel like it's something that they
have been missing out on because is as selfish and
dumb as it gets. I personally always loved to read
and I consider myself a fairly knowledgeable
person but I always had a problem when it came to
writing essays. I always had a hard time
expressing myself in a written form so my grades
were not that great. But when I was in my first
year of college I found out about this really cool
option of hiring someone to write your essays for
you. I jumped at the idea and hired them to write
my midterm paper. They did a splendid job and I
got an A for my midterm. (You can check their
website over here: https://textroyal.com
) I have been using them throughout my
college years on a regular basis and the never let
me down. If you guys need someone to help you with
your essays they are the guys to do the job.
Where can I find some more feedback?

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